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Why, Writer, Why?

Yet another fan-MST

This MST's subject: An Enchanted Trip to Agrabah (Chapter 5: Falling), an Aladdin fanfic

For those who are coming back, welcome back. For those who are just showing up, here's what you need to know.

Chapter 1: Anna, a girl from Wisconsin, somehow ends up being transported to Agrabah. How? We just don't know. She meets Jafar and ends up staying at the palace free of charge.
Chapter 2: Anna writes in her diary and Iago shows said diary entry to Jafar. Why? We just don't know.
Chapter 3: Anna gets arrested for having a crush on Jafar (yes, really), and is going to be beheaded. Jasmine and Jafar both take the flying carpet to save her. Why can't Jasmine just call off the beheading? We just don't know.
Chapter 4: Jasmine and Jafar save Anna in less than four sentences after the chapter starts, and then Jafar asks Anna to be his date to the Sultan's ball. She agrees, obviously.

So how is this ball going to turn out? Let's find out.

A/n: Sleeping Beauty, Hercules, and Little Mermaid reference included in this chapter.

[wut y tho]


As they entered the ballroom, a slow song was playing.

[Nothing specific? Okay, I'll just assume it's up to the reader to decide which song it is. Personally, I'd pick this one just because it started playing in my head after I read the chapter title.]

"Shall we?" asked Jafar offering a hand to Anna.

Anna took Jafar's hand, and they danced.

As they spun around the dance floor, Jafar felt like he was on top of the world. He knew he felt something special for Anna. Yet he was scared to tell her.

[I see Jafar's still ridiculously out of character as expected.]

"I only knew her for a couple of days, but I already know that there's something special between us.

[That would be the power of the bland Relationship Sue you're feeling.]

She's smart, she's funny, and she is very beautiful.

[If you say so.]

I am just afraid to tell her, because I have always been unlucky in relationships.

[What relationships?]

Every time I think I have a connection with someone, they change their minds.

[Gee, I can't imagine why that would be...]

There was Jasmine for one, I thought that kiss really meant something, but I was wrong. It was all a lie; she was just doing it to protect Aladdin.

[I'm pretty sure that one shouldn't count. I thought you were just going to marry her for her money anyway.]

Then there was Maleficiant, I found her very exciting, she had something about her that excited me.

[Who the hell is Maleficiant? ...Oh, you mean Maleficent? I don't remember you two being a thing outside of some episode of House of Mouse.

Oh, wait, I get it now; this is taking place in whatever continuity that the House of Mouse does.

That still doesn't explain why the rest of the Aladdin cast is okay with you hanging about, though.]


I guess it was her magical ability. I finally worked up the courage to ask her out, and she said yes. Only it turns out she was two timing me with Hades.

[I don't recall this episode of the show. I remember there was an episode with Hades hitting on her, but I don't remember what happened after that. Can someone confirm this for me please?]

Then there was Ursula who only wanted me for my powers.

[Wait, what? I don't remember this in anything.]

I thought she really liked me, but it turns out she only wanted to use me to help her take over Atlantica.

[Oh please, like you wouldn't do the same to her.]

Once I told her I lost all my powers after being trapped in a lamp, she told me she didn't want me anymore,"

[Wait, he lost his powers? I don't remember that happening either. Can someone tell me what the hell is going on here?]

Jafar thought about Anna, but he didn't want to get hurt again.

"Are you having a good time tonight?" asked Jafar

[No.]

"Yes I am, I'm glad I came," Anna smiled.

"I want to warn you about something. I am and always have been a hated man.

[Again, I can't imagine why.]

If you fall in love me, you'll get a lot of grief from everybody.

[I don't think "grief" is the word you're looking for there, Jafar.]

You might even get hurt. I would advise not getting to close," Jafar warned Anna.

[Says the guy who's currently out on a date and slow-dancing with her. Once again, I think it's too late for that.]

"Hey, everybody can change. Including you, you don't have to be this way if you don't want to," Anna told him. ["Say, have you ever considered putting on some leather pants? I've heard they're all the rage with villains these days."]

"I know, can I talk to you?" Jafar asked.

[Haven't you already been talking to her?]

"Of course you can, I am a great listener [I'm just not good at remembering things afterwards... I think]," Anna replied.

"Well I've always been unlucky when it comes to love. Every woman I have ever been interested has always changed their mind, and decided they did not want to be with me," Jafar opened up to Anna.

[What? Jasmine didn't change her mind; you said so yourself that she was just pretending to like you to keep Aladdin safe.]

"I know the feeling, all the boys I know are very immature. Most of them just make noises with their armpits, and other gross stuff," Anna sympathized.

[You don't know very many guys, do you Anna?]

"That's despicable," Jafar gave a grossed out look.

"I know," Anna laughed.

"You are much different than all the girls I knew, Anna. [You're much less interesting.] Most of the girls I know will just use you for power, money, or anything else you might have.

[Apparently Jafar doesn't know many girls either.]

I know you're not like that, you're so kind and helpful. I know I've only known you for a few days, but I know that you're a wonderful person, who deserves the best," Jafar told Anna, the two of them were still dancing.

Anna rested her head gently on Jafar's chest. Jafar loved the feeling of Anna being close to him, he knew Anna felt the same way.

When the dance was over, Jafar and Aladdin took Anna and Jasmine back to their rooms in the palace.

[But I thought they were sharing a room.]

"I had a wonderful time with you, Anna. I'm glad I met you and that we went to the ball together, this is a memory I will always remember [or at least I think I will]," Jafar told Anna.

Jafar wanted to kiss Anna so badly, but he was afraid she'd slap him or push him away. He decided to play it safe and not kiss her.

He gently touched Anna's cheek, and pulled her into a long hug.

"Goodnight Anna," Jafar said still hugging her.

"Goodnight Jafar," Anna yawned sleepily.

[Goodnight, everybody!
Wait, no, that quote shouldn't apply here... Uh... Screw it, I've got nothing.]
In which things between Anna and Jafar get...mildly warm.

Not gonna lie, I thought I accidentally skipped a chapter when I read the first few lines. :|

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Chapter 6: fav.me/d8g03h9
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Chapter 8: fav.me/d8gmk3w
Chapter 9: fav.me/d8gta91

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Review of chapter in one letter: Y

Nice riffing, though.